Here is what I did to it.
More of those sheep on Bitter Lake. The only white is the white of the canvas. I like it so far, but adding white to color is the turning point. I would say that I have the composition pretty close, and the tones seem as good as I know how to make them. Color should only enhance what I have so far. At least that's what suppose to happen. Thanks for looking.
oil on canvas 24"X12"
this painting is sold.
this painting is sold.
3 comments:
Rick, I'm not sure what you could add to improve this. There is some very nice line work going on here that I would hate to see covered up. It reminds me of a wonderful illustrator that painted a lot of movie posters back in the 80's. He painted the poster for "Indiana Jones" and signed his works "Drew". Put it aside and I think when you go back to it, you won't see anything to add or change.
Really nice work!
Well thanks Marilyn,
I could have used this critique, say............FOUR HOURS AGO!!!!!!!!!!
I like the top version -- it is finished, do not try to improve!
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